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Hard Times Ahead

31/07/07 get paid 01/08/07 bill's paid 02/08/07 £230 left until end of month same job 1 year later 31/07/08 get paid same money 01/08/08 same bill's paid 02/08/08 £72.73 left until end of month Hard times ahead 31/12/08 Tallan J Bent (c) 01:58Hrs Thank you all for the comments, I truly hold it close to my heart Thank You, a Happy New Year to everybody in poetrysoup and I wish as well as hope good things to you all in the new year.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2009 4:10:00 AM

Interesting writing at least you have a job with pay and are stable enough to hold it for a year and the place where you are employed is stable enough to still be there. Look forward to seeing more of your ideas on the net. Sara

Abraham L

Date: 1/6/2009 7:10:00 AM

Thanks for your comments as well, and the above poem sounds like my situation, but thankfully i'm not where i should be, but i am not where i use toi be. I am making progress

Date: 12/31/2008 5:09:00 PM

So fitting for the recent economic down turn. This is so creative. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Happy New Year to you too. Keep on writing! Karen

Christy Hardy

Date: 12/31/2008 4:26:00 AM

This is true for so many hard working people...I say we ask for a bailout, and give ourself a raise......excellent write, Always, Christy

Anthony Dover

Date: 12/31/2008 3:13:00 AM

There's comfort in knowing there's someone else in same position.