Tallan Bent Poet Senryu

Hard Times Ahead

31/07/07 get paid
01/08/07 bill's paid
02/08/07 £230 left until end of month

same job 1 year later

31/07/08 get paid same money
01/08/08 same bill's paid
02/08/08 £72.73 left until end of month

Hard times ahead

31/12/08 Tallan J Bent (c) 01:58Hrs




Thank you all for the comments, I truly hold it close to my heart Thank You, a Happy New 
Year 
to everybody in poetrysoup and I wish as well as hope good things to you all in the new year.

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Sara Kendrick July 14, 2009 at 4:10 AM Interesting writing at least you have a job with pay and are stable enough to hold it for a year and the place where you are employed is stable enough to still be there. Look forward to seeing more of your ideas on the net. Sara

Abraham L January 6, 2009 at 7:10 AM Thanks for your comments as well, and the above poem sounds like my situation, but thankfully i'm not where i should be, but i am not where i use toi be. I am making progress

December 31, 2008 at 5:09 PM So fitting for the recent economic down turn. This is so creative. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Happy New Year to you too. Keep on writing! Karen

Anthony Dover December 31, 2008 at 3:13 AM There's comfort in knowing there's someone else in same position.