Hard

Its hard to live, dis life its gettin to hard I got an ace in my hand, I got to play dis card Its alot goin on in life someone to encourage me, I think thats Christ

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/8/2009 11:23:00 AM

nice....soemthing to think about for sure i can relate

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/8/2009 5:37:00 AM

Hi Eric, Whatever that Ace is, don't play it unless it is for the good and with God's grace. Read Job in the holy Bible. Everyone, even his best friends turned on him. He lost practically everything, but NEVER gave up his faith in God. He even wanted to die, but instead, God saw him through it and blessed him tremendously. You have strong faith. Cling to it and endure. You can get through these trials. God Bless you. Keep writing. Love, Dane

Alley Poe

Date: 5/7/2009 10:59:00 AM

I agree, Christ can really encourage you!!! Welcome to poetry soup!!! -Alley