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Happy Snail Trails

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                                                  lowly beachcomber

                                           probing for minuscule snacks

                                                   plentiful low tide

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/25/2010 7:41:00 AM Love the haiku as well as the title, Mitch! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/24/2010 8:53:00 PM Hey, I see I am not the only one who was wondering what the heck that thing was. I too ended up calling it a beachcomber!! however I gave a title that may have shot myself in the foot! I like yours. congrats.Andrea Login to Reply

Date: 4/24/2010 4:23:00 PM Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go! Keep on writing. Karen Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/24/2010 1:40:00 PM Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in the Journey contest... perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/24/2010 1:38:00 PM Hey Mitch, my congratulations on this fantastic Haiku!! Enjoy your win! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/24/2010 4:30:00 AM yes goes real good with the picture..p.d. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/24/2010 3:31:00 AM Great interpertation of the picture...Should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara Login to Reply