Mitch White Poet Haiku

Happy Snail Trails

.
                                                  lowly beachcomber

                                           probing for minuscule snacks

                                                   plentiful low tide

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2010 at 7:41 AM Love the haiku as well as the title, Mitch! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2010 at 8:53 PM Hey, I see I am not the only one who was wondering what the heck that thing was. I too ended up calling it a beachcomber!! however I gave a title that may have shot myself in the foot! I like yours. congrats.Andrea

April 24, 2010 at 4:23 PM Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go! Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 24, 2010 at 1:40 PM Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in the Journey contest... perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Audrey Haick April 24, 2010 at 1:38 PM Hey Mitch, my congratulations on this fantastic Haiku!! Enjoy your win! Peace, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2010 at 4:30 AM yes goes real good with the picture..p.d.

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2010 at 3:31 AM Great interpertation of the picture...Should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara