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Happy Moments

my kids voices their warm joyful smiles a mothers blessing to watch them grow lights my life and world I am so happy the power of poetry I get all tingly inside fullfilling hearts happiness will survive dreams do come true FOR LINDA MARIE HARVEST OF HAPPINESS CONTEST

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 11:06:00 PM

Faleshia,, great haikus, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Susan Palli

Date: 9/25/2010 11:17:00 PM

Excellent! could feel the joy

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/25/2010 5:56:00 PM

Hi Faleshia! Long time no see, dear, girl. Hope all is well and thanks for leaving comments for me. Blessings toyou and your dear family. Oh! And good luck in the contest with these touching Haikus! These are blessings! Love, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/25/2010 3:29:00 PM

such an inspiring and uplifting poem that celebrates motherhood! wish you the best of luck in the contest :)-- nikko :)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/17/2010 9:43:00 PM

Terrific write and images, Faleshia. Keep that pen flowing and good luck in the contest. Dan C

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 1:28:00 PM

A very creative and interesting write for the contest, faleshia.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2010 1:02:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this wonderful write that reads like winners' circle material..Thanks for stoppiing by and reading my work..I notice your top line did not stay in line with the rest of your work..If you want to center anything place a period or dot in the upper left-hand corner that will keep that top line from going to the left side of the page..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 10:36:00 AM

As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Faleshia. Great to see you posting and entering contests.Wish you the best in the contests my friend. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2010 10:19:00 AM

Faleshia thanks for sharing your happy moments. All the best for Linda's contest :)

Liz Walsh

Date: 9/17/2010 9:25:00 AM

lovely evocative piece