Happy Hour

the cripple limped through the crush for his tipple - with nary a ripple

February 14, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:33 PM
so cute with the internal rhyme. Congrats.
Alex Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 9:12 PM
"nary a ripple" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 7:59 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:27 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest -
Lillico  Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 2:28 AM
- A great monoku, Peter - Luck in the contest :) -
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Yep some certainly have great technique when it comes to downing a pint, never a drop spilt, great Monoku, cheers David
Lillico  Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Thank you!
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