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the cripple limped through the crush for his tipple - with nary a ripple February 14, 2023

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Date: 2/20/2023 3:33:00 PM
so cute with the internal rhyme. Congrats.
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Date: 2/18/2023 9:12:00 PM
"nary a ripple" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/17/2023 7:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 2/17/2023 9:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest -
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/17/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/15/2023 2:28:00 AM
- A great monoku, Peter - Luck in the contest :) -
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Date: 2/14/2023 12:19:00 PM
Yep some certainly have great technique when it comes to downing a pint, never a drop spilt, great Monoku, cheers David
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/17/2023 10:53:00 AM
Thank you!

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