Happy Days

Waterfalls flood my spirit and rouse my amber eyes awake as I cry. Butterflies weave a grin on my mouth as I count these blessings passing by! The pure azure sky crowns me with acceptance while the sun hues me in luminosity. Daffodils caress me with penance just as the lime grass wraps me in a ditty! This heart of mine wants to beat out of my chest so it can grant its love. Even through all of this silly doubt, I was born to fly freely like a dove! Shoot my wings, but despite you put me through, life will continue to find its ways. Right now, this is my beautiful time to finally, live my journey with happy days! (Written on July 1st, 2017 for Nayda Ivette Negron's Happy Days Contest) P.S. This poem won 8th place in the contest, thanks, Nayda!

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Date: 7/4/2017 9:47:00 PM
Great win Alyssa :)
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/5/2017 12:59:00 PM
Thank you! Congrats for winning 6th place, Jeremy! :)
Date: 7/3/2017 10:59:00 AM
Sweet thoughts Alyssa, best wishes...
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/3/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie! :)
Date: 7/2/2017 11:48:00 AM
Some wonderful imagery in this poem, Alyssa. Good luck!
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/2/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel! It took me some time to think of imagery for this, however, I'm proud of the final product. :)
Date: 7/2/2017 4:17:00 AM
Alyssa this made me feel happy, beautifully written. Good luck in the contest.
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/2/2017 10:19:00 AM
Aww, thanks, Elizabeth! :)
Date: 7/1/2017 9:42:00 PM
May there be many happy days for you ahead :) Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 7/2/2017 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jeremy! :)
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