Happy Birthday, Debs

Emailing cake is hard to do,
And so I wrote a verse for you.
I hope your day is filled with fun;
A happy time with lots of sun.
I hope you will accept from me
A cyber hug across the sea.

For Deb’s birthday contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/1/2013 5:25:00 PM
nicely done Jack ,,,,, I'm sure Debbie liked it too ;} and you won, awesome for that, Happy New Year ;}
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:43:00 PM
JACK, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:46:00 PM
Now Jack, I mailed my daughter who was living in Bristol her Birthday cake... ended up more like an upside down cake, but it can be done. Great poem. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:57:00 PM
Many congrats Jack for this win.
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:24:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND JACK FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:50:00 PM
Big congrats Jack nithing like a cyber hug to get a girl going lol xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:34:00 PM
Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:15:00 AM
wow!!! so sweet and lovely birthday poem you've penned my dear Jack. i am sure Debs will love this!!! Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read, comment and congratulate me on my wins.Good luck and best wishes to you in all the contests, too!!! have a nice and grace-filled day! hugs:)
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Date: 9/21/2012 2:11:00 AM
oh so cute Jack luv .. am sure Debbie will accept that hug and cake too .. winning wishes my friend .. will send email Friday .. Ron is too droopy-eyed from my dictating all the comments .. he is a good sport ..
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:46:00 AM
aw... love this! so clever :)
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:40:00 AM
brilliant jack, deb will just love this...
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Date: 9/19/2012 9:22:00 PM
wow, this is ONE AWESOME LITTLE BIRTHDAY poem. I love it, Jack.
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Date: 9/19/2012 6:22:00 PM
This is soo much better than cake....a very touching birthday poem! Nicely done!!
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Date: 9/19/2012 3:23:00 PM
short and very sweet! nice poem!
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:21:00 PM
Ahhh!..Reads like a winner ....Great quick thinking..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..That would be a very long armed person wouldn't it..Sara
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Date: 9/19/2012 12:36:00 PM
Cakes are not easy to send ..... But this greeting is perfect Jack. Very well written. Luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:18:00 AM
Gosh I bet she will, you can send me one whenever but send it up north my friend. I am sure Deb will love it xx
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:16:00 AM
This is such a tenderhearted write my friend! I know Debbie is honored to get this hug from you for her Birthday! You created a fabulous poem here Jack, the flow and rhythm are perfect, and the rhyme is right on time! Magnificent piece, Great Work!!
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