Happy Birthday, Debs

Emailing cake is hard to do,
And so I wrote a verse for you.
I hope your day is filled with fun;
A happy time with lots of sun.
I hope you will accept from me
A cyber hug across the sea.

For Deb’s birthday contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 5:25 PM
nicely done Jack ,,,,, I'm sure Debbie liked it too ;} and you won, awesome for that, Happy New Year ;}
A   Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 1:43 PM
JACK, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 9:46 PM
Now Jack, I mailed my daughter who was living in Bristol her Birthday cake... ended up more like an upside down cake, but it can be done. Great poem. Well done. Lee
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations on your win Jack. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 10:57 PM
Many congrats Jack for this win.
Liwayway Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 10:24 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND JACK FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Big congrats Jack nithing like a cyber hug to get a girl going lol xx
Guzzi Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 12:34 PM
Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love
Gasun Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 5:15 AM
wow!!! so sweet and lovely birthday poem you've penned my dear Jack. i am sure Debs will love this!!! Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read, comment and congratulate me on my wins.Good luck and best wishes to you in all the contests, too!!! have a nice and grace-filled day! hugs:)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 2:11 AM
oh so cute Jack luv .. am sure Debbie will accept that hug and cake too .. winning wishes my friend .. will send email Friday .. Ron is too droopy-eyed from my dictating all the comments .. he is a good sport ..
Susan Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 7:46 AM
aw... love this! so clever :)
Horsman Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 7:40 AM
brilliant jack, deb will just love this...
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 9:22 PM
wow, this is ONE AWESOME LITTLE BIRTHDAY poem. I love it, Jack.
Richards Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 6:22 PM
This is soo much better than cake....a very touching birthday poem! Nicely done!!
Bauer Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 3:23 PM
short and very sweet! nice poem!
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Ahhh!..Reads like a winner ....Great quick thinking..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..That would be a very long armed person wouldn't it..Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Cakes are not easy to send ..... But this greeting is perfect Jack. Very well written. Luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:18 AM
Gosh I bet she will, you can send me one whenever but send it up north my friend. I am sure Deb will love it xx
Sivey Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:16 AM
This is such a tenderhearted write my friend! I know Debbie is honored to get this hug from you for her Birthday! You created a fabulous poem here Jack, the flow and rhythm are perfect, and the rhyme is right on time! Magnificent piece, Great Work!!
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