Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Happy Birthday By Text

I hope you have a happy day
and do the things you like to do -
I'm not around, because you left
and she is living now with you...

LOL, just a different take on the contest - written 4th September for the birthday greetings to a spouse contest

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Indiana Shaw March 9, 2022 at 3:20 PM A bitter-sweet birthday text, love it . . . ; )

Jennifer Proxenos October 3, 2021 at 9:10 AM Today's life has become so complicated, or some would say simpler. What used to be is not what it is now and sometimes what should be, never happens. I always enjoy your poems Jack. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2021 at 6:13 AM Different is good

Phyllis Babcock September 26, 2021 at 10:22 AM Times are different nowadays from when we were young and you put a different twist to this write. I hope you both are keeping well and enjoying fall. A beautiful fall we are having at the moment. love phyl

Harry Horsman September 8, 2021 at 9:23 PM Sure is different Jack, Says lots about today.

Judy Ball September 6, 2021 at 11:23 PM Well done. Excellent rhyme, rhythm and flow. God Bless, JB

Beryl Edmonds September 6, 2021 at 12:11 PM Good one Jack, great take on the theme for the contest… Belle

Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2021 at 8:46 PM that is great, Jack. A nice humorous one!

Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2021 at 6:44 AM I like your original take on the contest. Thanks as well for your visit and comment on my latest poem.

Tom Cunningham September 4, 2021 at 1:06 PM Lol, I suppose its the modern way. Tom

Sara Kendrick September 4, 2021 at 12:08 PM Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Sara