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Happy Birthday

A friend, forever found to pick me up when I'm down
Let's me be myself and I've never had to watch her turn around
Incased in a closed shell, hides the deepest poet
She's to afraid to open, so she grabs the door to close it
Over the rainbow, she's the pot of gold that I found
Noticed that beautiful smile, she taught me how to never look down

Missed my shot a couple times, but I still dribble the ball
At first impression I never thought I could make her my all
Till the first kiss who knew, the hard work payed off
Tomorrow doesn't have to come as long her lips stay soft
How could someone sweep someone so far, so fast, it was all luck
Every old friend jealous because we ditched them, because we were us
We stay true eachother, we're poetic and we'll always be
Say goodbye to the past, cause without you there's no me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/1/2013 12:53:00 AM
Didn't even notice the acrostic bonus to this before hand... nice touch!
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Date: 5/1/2013 12:47:00 AM
Wow, Aaron... I'm so happy for you! I like to see things turning around for you and it show in your writing. I've been on a trip and haven't had time for the Soup... you're still just as thoughtful and poetic as I remember. Fantastic writing as always!
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