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Happy 4th of July

bang bang bang bang pow
night red, white,  blue  pom pom blooms 
runaway dogs fear


7/5/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 9:02 AM
great twist at the end, Eve!! Belated happy fourth of July to you
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 9:32 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful 4th Haiku write. What A Great Picture. Sorry I missed this yesterday. The 4th is our anniversary. Hope you had a fun holiday. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Roper Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Thank you , Paula, congratulation on your anniversary. Bless you
Rodgers Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Dear Eve, I loved your 4th of July Haiku!! I did have a great time with my wife, daughters and granddaughters. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Roper Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Glad you had a great time :) Blessings to you and yours
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