Happy 4th of July

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2024 9:02:00 AM

great twist at the end, Eve!! Belated happy fourth of July to you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/5/2024 9:32:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful 4th Haiku write. What A Great Picture. Sorry I missed this yesterday. The 4th is our anniversary. Hope you had a fun holiday. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Eve Roper
Date: 7/5/2024 1:02:00 PM

Thank you , Paula, congratulation on your anniversary. Bless you

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/5/2024 7:38:00 AM

Dear Eve, I loved your 4th of July Haiku!! I did have a great time with my wife, daughters and granddaughters. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Eve Roper
Date: 7/5/2024 1:01:00 PM

Glad you had a great time :) Blessings to you and yours