Happiness, Worries, Life

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I wrote this poem for my friend from her point of veiw.

My life is a mess, I'm feeling happy less and less, Just lost a friend, pretend, Bullied for my looks, In my heart there are hooks, My dog is there for me, At least she can see, My inner thoughts and worries, She's never in any hurries, To listen to my conversation, When I'm in a situation, There are a couple special people at school, For my happiness, they are my fuel, I am also worried about death, What happens when I take my last breath!? The future is looking pretty bleak, All these worries that I let speak, My friends say that they will be there for me, But I don't know if I agree, What if they don't want to be friends anymore, In the very near future there could be war, Between me and my friends, What if all my friendships end, I need to take a deep breath in, And slowly out, now pretend grin, But sigh, I am still sad, All my worries, all so bad.

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Aly Bahr

Date: 10/16/2023 3:52:00 PM

You have a big open heart my love, but big open hearts are easily hurt. But never let the pain close your heart, all the pain is worth the true friendships you will find in life and you will always be truly loved.

Fire Bird
Date: 10/16/2023 5:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for this comment, you have raised me well so hopefully I don't lose to many friends over the years. - Phoenix :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/13/2023 5:54:00 AM

This is lovely. Well done.

Fire Bird
Date: 10/13/2023 12:45:00 PM

Thank you!! I hope my friend likes it. - Phoenix :)