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Happiness Satiating

Hazy horizon blazes even after the spent sun setS Arid dunes undulate as static waves on the sand seA Parched life trailing toiled the mirage, needs to waiT Pacing weary to the oasis etched at the edge of ennuI Instilled by psychic vibe the journey ends in euphoriA Nascent hopes on bliss waves roll gems on time presenT Exaltation drips like stardust from mind sky, sense a priorI Suffuses my heart while I walk the last mile of satiatioN Sinking within I hear the song of ecstasy, soul starts to sinG. May 28, 2020 For Brian Strand's Contest A Brian Strand August

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Date: 8/3/2021 8:27:00 AM
Wow! This double acrostic looks really difficult to pull off, but you did it well! Congrats on your win, Subimal, in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/3/2020 7:29:00 AM
Wonderful write Subimal, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/2/2020 11:53:00 PM
If one hears this ecstatic song as one walks the last miles, one achieves Moksha, the satisfaction, one has searched all life. A very mature muse. Congrats. Mohan
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