Happiness Satiating

Hazy horizon blazes even after the spent sun setS
Arid dunes undulate as static waves on the sand seA
Parched life trailing toiled the mirage, needs to waiT
Pacing weary to the oasis etched at the edge of ennuI
Instilled by psychic vibe the journey ends in euphoriA
Nascent hopes on bliss waves roll gems on time presenT
Exaltation drips like stardust from mind sky, sense a priorI
Suffuses my heart while I walk the last mile of satiatioN
Sinking within I hear the song of ecstasy, soul starts to sinG.

May 28, 2020
For Brian Strand's Contest A Brian Strand August
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Merryman Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Wow! This double acrostic looks really difficult to pull off, but you did it well! Congrats on your win, Subimal, in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
May Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Wonderful write Subimal, Congrats on your win
Chutani Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 11:53 PM
If one hears this ecstatic song as one walks the last miles, one achieves Moksha, the satisfaction, one has searched all life. A very mature muse. Congrats. Mohan
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