Happiness

When I started to write this rhyme
I thought that this very instant
Was my own, precious time
My presaged, peculiar moment
Maybe I was in my prime
Perhaps it was my promised minute
But the feeling was so sublime
That I would remember it forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 2:32 PM
you write beautifully, in your own precious time, Vesna.. this is a lovely poem....
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Very emotive work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara..Your presence at my work was uplifting...
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:07 AM
very interesting one. I have had moments like you describe. Interestingly, I DID forget them, but not the memory of having thought that I would remember them. Does that make sense??
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:06 AM
It is a very good poem in rhyme Vesna. - I'm not so good at writing poems with rhyme in English - but, love to write poems in rhyme in Norwegian. - It is so difficult to find right words in another language. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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