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Happiness

If you look to others for your own happiness You will always be disappointed for Happiness has to begin From within You And Me Can you see the shape that the words do make A gun ponted straight to the heart if You do not recall the whispers Of The One deep From within You And Me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/30/2010 1:48:00 PM
Thought provoking poem. So much truth in your first stanza. Interesting that you chose the shape of gun--it has me wondering why. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:20:00 PM
<) very, very true! i may not've put it better myself! ------Ell
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