Happiness

Happiness.

                     Happiness for sale ?
                     Only for a while
                     Afterwords pale !.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 1, 2009 at 4:38 PM
fun senryu! Chacko!...love the pause and space before ? & ! ....gives a feeling of hesitation, which adds depth to your fine poem!!! jimbo
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