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Happiness

Happiness. Happiness for sale ? Only for a while Afterwords pale !.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/1/2009 4:38:00 PM
fun senryu! Chacko!...love the pause and space before ? & ! ....gives a feeling of hesitation, which adds depth to your fine poem!!! jimbo
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