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H earts beat in excitement, A s it passes by. P laying in the air, P eeking into your hearts, I t brings a smile to every face. N ever ending laughter, E xpresses such enchantment, S omehow it paints, S unlight across the dark sky. *Sorry for not being here for such a long time, but i didn't forget u guys at all n i never will:) i see that everyone is writing some really beautiful poetry n i am enjoyin lotz of n smiles Maryam*

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Date: 6/28/2009 11:01:00 PM
Such a joyous write that reflects your inner beauty. Welcome back, Maryam. I have been away for a bit too -- packing to move. Hope to see more of your work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/28/2009 11:34:00 AM
Maryam, This was beautiful. I love it! It makes me happy just reading this poem. Keep writing more! I miss it! With love, Alli B.
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Date: 6/27/2009 7:36:00 PM
Maryam, I love the pure innocence of this beauty! jim
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Date: 6/27/2009 5:59:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this uplifting view with us. Nice use of the challenging acrostic form. Welcome back to The Soup! We all need a break from time to time but it's always nice to journey back to this poetry home. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 6/27/2009 2:24:00 PM
It's been a long long time since I wrote one of these.
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