Paloma P Poet Carpe Diem

Happenstance Hazards

Expectation's misdemeanors
     outflanking volition 
infringed upon experience's
       self-imposed options,
griping on about whirlwind's
      imposing velocity to
  which atmospheric pressure
     has naught resolving power
  whence high tide pressure rises
       persuading tendencies,
universe hardly questions 'why' 
   to phenomenons' meddle,
psychobabble' s deliberations
 deluding  prospective trespasses,
conclusive interpretation hence life
   is but a crapshoot game of chance

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Doug Vinson December 10, 2016 at 7:55 AM I think it really is a crapshoot, i.e. I believe in free will. Although we wouldn't necessarily know. Anyway, they who have the most ammunition can take down the most crap. Doug Vinson December 10, 2016 at 12:55 PM Say hello to my leetle friend... Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 9:04 AM I thought it was the most toys...

Tim Smith December 6, 2016 at 11:08 AM Let the hand play out how it may but enjoy the game played... I've won and I've lost but I've lived and wouldn't change a minute...well maybe that one time... Paloma P December 6, 2016 at 11:11 AM We don't really have many other choices, there's always that one time...dang it. :)

Daniel Turner December 6, 2016 at 10:49 AM The odds may be a little better in a crapshoot. I love your style, Paloma:) How funny, my captcha letters are NYC Paloma P December 6, 2016 at 11:07 AM Now, that's no crapshoot. :) Merci Beaucoup Danny.

Chris Green December 6, 2016 at 10:22 AM Yep, roll the dice and see where you stand on any given day. Sometimes lady luck smiles on you and sometimes she stabs you in the back. Nicely expressed my friend. Paloma P December 6, 2016 at 10:36 AM Is that where that dagger came from? :) Thanks Chris.

Heidi Sands December 6, 2016 at 9:03 AM I like the ending. :) Paloma P December 6, 2016 at 10:19 AM Thanks Heidi. :)