Happening No 4 Ear Candy

rhythm 
      sound
       and round,
high then
        low
tapping feet
        on the go
fingers
      tapping
head
        nodding
...eyes
         close:
merry-go-round
beat
      on and on
then
        melody
swaying
    back 
    and
    forth

thoughts inspired by Dave Brubeck 1959 Jazz hit 'Take Five'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:00 AM
So lovely, Brian!
Strand Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Bless you Kim
Sands Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:55 AM
A fun poem Brian! Well done :)
Strand Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thanks Heidi
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