Happening 145 Ear Candy

gently
     awakening
     half
        dreaming

still

in 
that
no man's
           land
twixt
dream
     &
       reality
eye
wide
     open...
now
   engaged

Inspired by Vivaldi Autumn adagio
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Connelly Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Brian I thought the "twixt" in the middle was the candy? Ah, Vivaldi. Check out Hector Berlioz.
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March 2, 2019 at 12:35 AM
listening looking at a score touch down!!! Berlioz in the end zone so said the raven "Nevermore" and the fans the fans a going wild no one expected the unexpected from Berlioz those without stats please read that he broke the musical rules while simply writing writing simple melodies simply so backed by a jammed packed more then double an orchestra forget the music he was a womanizer simply trying to find his muse
Strand Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Yes,Jeff I know his work.Thanks
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