Happening 129 Ear Candy

time
is
standing
still,
dawn
   is
     stirring,
         light   
           aglowing,
dark
disappearing
           despair
            defeated...
gone..
banished..
             forever

 Inspired by straumnes bysigur ros
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marine Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Me too! Despair defeated- love it! : ) Banished forever is even better!
Strand Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Yes indeed,AM,thanks
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Oh wow, another favorite. I love this! Despair defeated! Well done! :)
Strand Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Bless you Heidi
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