Happening 114 Ear Candy

waiting
    always
      waiting,
watching
for you
to 
    return:
I miss
  you
    so,
to me,
you 
  make
    life
come
to life:
so
   I wait
please
please
  come
    back

inspired by Missing You clip by Nakamura
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:17 AM
The yearning is felt in these words. Well done Brian :)
Strand Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:32 AM
An as is moment Heidi ,as I heard this evocative clip,thanks
Bangalee Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:28 AM
o light! lit your depth, look - darling is coming..... wait, wait and make me waiting on your true lighting ///nice
Strand Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thanks for your observation Mahtab
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