Home » Poems » Tim Ryerson » Hank's Pentameter

Hank's Pentameter

back-alley barroom scratchy, juke box 45's 'so lonesome' Hank moans ("I'm So Lonesome I Could Cry" by Hank Williams) For Susan's Single Senryu contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/10/2013 1:40:00 PM

Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 6/8/2013 9:40:00 AM

Awesome Tim...congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 8:48:00 PM

BIG congrats, Tim. You deserve it! I just love that song!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:41:00 PM

Tim, enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 6/4/2013 10:31:00 PM

lol, a favorite tune of mine, you capture the place very well, Tim, congratulations on your win

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/4/2013 4:23:00 PM

You got the idea Cher, emotion! & wit ;) Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2013 11:12:00 AM

Spend a lot of time there, do you?? Put a few quarters in for me.....I would like "Cold Cold Heart" ! :) Congrats!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/4/2013 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Tim xx

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/27/2013 6:00:00 PM

Ah, the good ole days. Good luck in the contest, Tim. Licia :-)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/25/2013 11:28:00 AM

Those were (not) the days.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2013 2:28:00 PM

I enjoy the mood of this one, my friend!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/22/2013 1:32:00 PM

i like the the movement, tone and overall feel to this awesome write!.. music for my soul, tim...quite extraordinary!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2013 12:54:00 PM

- Good old juke box ...... (with music that really was music ...) - Well done, Tim!!!! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)