Hangry



Raging force inside
Like anger groaning in pain
Worms are hangry!


By: Doris Jamoner
05/24/2014

angersenryu

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Teddy Kimathi

October 18, 2014 at 2:52 AM

Hi Doris. I love the way you have expressed the truth in its nakedness, without clothing it with metaphors or deep symbolism. Regards, Teddy.

Doris Jamoner

October 21, 2014 at 2:55 PM

Thank you for your words Teddy : )

Joe Murphy

July 21, 2014 at 6:54 PM

New to your work. Love your "raging force inside," it us what drives me to write, be me, be different, yet striking a chord in all of us.

Doris Jamoner

August 28, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Thanks Joe ^^

Jslambert Mister Roboto

July 13, 2014 at 1:47 PM

I just played a game of HANGRY HANGY Hippo! Nice word YO!

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:15 PM

Hehe sounds like a fun game ^^

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2014 at 9:30 PM

I take it that hangry is a new word you created for hungry and angry at same time? That is cool!!

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:15 PM

hehe Thanks for the comment Andrea ^^

Sara Kendrick

June 25, 2014 at 2:42 PM

Well this one is somewhat sad and funny..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for dropping by.Sara

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:14 PM

Thank u too Sara : )

Klim John

June 9, 2014 at 3:44 AM

Great poem Doris. I can relate to the feeling.

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:14 PM

Thanks for dropping by.

David Williams

June 3, 2014 at 12:44 PM

Doris I know what you mean ...David

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:14 PM

Thanks for dropping by.

Jerry Bolton

June 2, 2014 at 12:46 PM

Ooooh!! We have to be careful of the hangry in our lives. It can become a force of destruction. Love the senryu, and the new word.

Doris Jamoner

June 3, 2014 at 5:37 AM

yes so true could be due to our negligence .. Thank you for dropping by : )

Vincent Flannery

May 31, 2014 at 9:23 AM

Great job Doris! Look forward to reading more. Best wishes in all you do and take care.

Doris Jamoner

June 3, 2014 at 5:33 AM

Thank you vincent : )

Earl Schumacker

May 28, 2014 at 6:53 AM

Good morning Doris, I've read all of your poetry posted here. Wow. Very compelling. I see you are new at Poetry Soup. Welcome! We take you in with open arms. Keep up the great work. I hope and pray to read something more light and happy from you as time goes by. (Deep and dark is fine.) I just hope you find happiness and wish you the best. Have a great day. Earl

Doris Jamoner

May 28, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Thank you Earl.. Yes I am new here and I'm happy to find this website. Well yeahh I am planning to make a light and happy poem on my next poem somewhere in June. : )

Arthur Vaso

May 25, 2014 at 6:11 PM

Lovely poem!

Doris Jamoner

May 28, 2014 at 10:00 AM

Thanks!

Scott Thirtyseven

May 25, 2014 at 5:08 AM

Love it, you have written about a sensation that we all know, and therefore you've given us an enjoyable poem. It's just that you spelt it wrong. I'm sure you mean "Hungry".

Doris Jamoner

May 28, 2014 at 9:59 AM

It's okay.. I really appreciate when someone correct me since English is not my native language. : )

Scott Thirtyseven

May 26, 2014 at 4:41 AM

Approved by the Collins English dictionary 4/9/12. Thanks for the great new word. Should never have doubted you. I know that now.

Doris Jamoner

May 25, 2014 at 12:08 PM

Thank you... I really mean hangry.. it means to be angry as a result of being hungry,