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Hanging Onto Summer

The book of summer was long overdue Should have been returned to the library I hesitated wanting to hold onto Its pages of sunshine, blue skies Balmy winds, beach barbecues Days at the cottage, all my heavenly flowers But I was reluctantly forced to return it And check out the book of October And although I pined for summer I did enjoy the harvest moons Falling leaves of golds and reds Vivid sunsets and wheat fields Children dressed for Halloween Burning piles of sweet hickory leaves I knew the books of winter and spring Were waiting for me back on that shelf And as time went by, I would learn How to love these seasons also

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/4/2008 12:23:00 PM
It seems that the older I get, the faster I need to read those books!! Those seasons change more quickly than they used too...and I need to return my books sooner than in the old days! Clever poem! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/4/2008 7:24:00 AM
Valerie nice thought. Very creative. Love this poem. Thanks for sharing. Blessings Michael
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Date: 10/4/2008 4:19:00 AM
When summer ended, I felt so sad for I had enjoyed every moment in it. This summer passed so quickly~ With a glimpse of an eye it ended~ Time is passing so quickly....lovely write...Sara...
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Date: 10/4/2008 1:47:00 AM
Valerie this poem is quite beautiful in many ways - metaphorically speaking it is great as is the message - Great job on this poem - God Bless
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Date: 10/4/2008 12:00:00 AM
So creative. Loved the use of metaphors. The words were penned to create a beautiful, vivid and deep picture and my friend I can feel that I'm reading the book of autumn which soon I'll have to return. Love, Chitra
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