hanging on, for now

Another minute passes
Another one is gone 
The sun has fully faded
Safe to hide until dawn

An observer of this mess
A passenger on this ride
Backed into the corner
While golden children thrive

When uncertainty invades
Stomach fills with dread
Make amends with myself
Before heartbreak comes again

Self-worth is a fragile egg
As is heart, soul, and mind
Hanging on by a thread
Just trying to stay alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 10:23 AM
Hello Ben Walker, Yes that is how I see someone hanging in. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Lassiter Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 6:48 PM
I can admit that I’ve felt this way. I love how honest you are in your writing.
Daniels Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 5:51 AM
I like the cadence, title, rhyme and last line, Ben. A concise poem articulating a range of emotions. I liked this line : “Self-worth is a fragile egg”. Well done & keep expressing yourself. Sending blessings from South Africa.
Maul Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 6:49 PM
Great piece of writing
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