Handsome Beauty

Handsome beauty faded beneath the hot Australian sun.
Heart hardened it laugh's no more.
He reaches for that dam bottle once innocent.
Health rattles cough deepens sad habits fill his life.
Help over as no one dares to come.
Home burns with rancid stench, his will is lost.
Handsome beauty he tries everything to forget.
Harsh daylight strikes he stumbles the shower runs.
Heaving forward he falls and hits his pounding head.
Half hour past the fog begins to clear, no work today.
Hot endless days, a half smoked cigarette same bottle starts again.
Handsome beauty fades.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/30/2016 6:02:00 PM
JEFFREY, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:53:00 PM
Hi Jeffrey, nice to read your first poem. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind welcome it is nice to be here. I cannot wait to be exposed to lots of other poets work and enjoy this new journey I have embarked on.. Kind Regards
Date: 1/4/2016 10:09:00 PM
Jeffrey, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Jeffrey Franklin
Date: 1/4/2016 10:34:00 PM
Hi SKAT thank you for your kind introduction to Poetry Soup, I am from Australia and have loved Poetry all my life.. only now have to courage to share my wok. I will keep going as I have received positive feedback that makes me want to share more. Kind Regards and chat soon Jeff
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