Hands Off

Enraged raw and spitting Love warped beyond identity Ten fingers ready to in-dulge Sick offerings real men can't abide Scarring rosette flesh once, always Memories etched eternal Blasphemers amuck, still free Where is the Newberry blade Cast upon ogres smiling with glee Revulsion retching tears without salt Anguish of hopeless helpless men Protection eludes soul aching ire Never settle for less than hellfire
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Allison Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 4:55 AM
raw and hard hitting in so many ways, am more used to your haiku poems, excellent ink AP! hugs jan xx
Parker Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Visit and comments much appreciated, JA. :o)
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 10:30 PM
This is a powerful one, Arlo. It packs a punch
Parker Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Thx, AD. Punch the offenders!!!
May Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 6:38 AM
On the cutting edge of wrath, your words bring forth the fire
Parker Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Some subjects beget raw response and need to be vented. Thanks for visit. =;o)
Nicole Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Your title says it all. Yes, ' hands off ' . . . please ! ! I agree with Victor, so deserving of such punishment, yet, needing prayers for sure. This is deep, powerful and emotional. ~ BL
Parker Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 9:27 AM
A bit of a rage. Thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 2:25 AM
Anguish of hopeless helpless men: so many of them. They deserve hell... but let's be charitable and pray for them.
Parker Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Indeed, but never sanction or forget.
Puddifoot Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 4:30 AM
if anger makes you write like this maybe you should get angry more often! i don't tar all men with the same brush..you're very different, special to me
Parker Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:58 AM
Immediately incensed. There is a poet here who is extraordinarily talented. They portray such pain I am drenched. Weeping and gnashing. :((
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