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Hand On My Heart

she held me, I held her, we held each other, till we could feel the beats of our hearts! She kissed me, I kissed her, we kissed each other, we could not be pulled apart! dreams and dreams, and many more dreams, dreaming we slept in each others arms! flowers of springs, those autumn days, the summer in May, Snowy walks in those riverside farms! wedding bells, those dancing girls, white horse carriages, friends and families cheering us along! decades of love, dedications and care, decades still to share, may this last forever and for long! a prayer to heaven, a whisper to God, to express our thanks, with our hands on our hearts!
1st Placement written 25/10/2021 Mystic Rose sponsored Rhyme sequence , every third line rhymes with 3 rd line of next stanza. With my hand on my heart!

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Date: 10/26/2021 8:49:00 PM
This is beautiful. So wonderful when a man expresses his love. Congratulations on your win.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/26/2021 11:05:00 PM
Thanks Virginia! Men are romantic but too shy to express it!:)
Date: 10/26/2021 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. I hope you will print this off and put it in a card as a gift. Have a blessed autumn day.......................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/26/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Paula! I am pleased to hear from you always!! My kindest regards Krish
Date: 10/26/2021 7:39:00 AM
That’s a beautiful dedication to the one you love, and as already said it reads alike a song and a prayer. Congratulations on your win in the contest Krish…… Well done! Belle
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/26/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Belle! Appreciate your very kind words!:)
Date: 10/26/2021 3:47:00 AM
"decades of love, dedications and care, decades still to share, may this last forever and for long!" - A beautiful poetic prayer. The whole poem is a beautiful love song. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/26/2021 3:51:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj!! So happy you like it! Regards

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