Hand On My Heart

she held me, I held her, we held each other, till we could feel the beats of our hearts! She kissed me, I kissed her, we kissed each other, we could not be pulled apart! dreams and dreams, and many more dreams, dreaming we slept in each others arms! flowers of springs, those autumn days, the summer in May, Snowy walks in those riverside farms! wedding bells, those dancing girls, white horse carriages, friends and families cheering us along! decades of love, dedications and care, decades still to share, may this last forever and for long! a prayer to heaven, a whisper to God, to express our thanks, with our hands on our hearts!
1st Placement written 25/10/2021 Mystic Rose sponsored Rhyme sequence , every third line rhymes with 3 rd line of next stanza. With my hand on my heart!
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Gelok Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 8:49 PM
This is beautiful. So wonderful when a man expresses his love. Congratulations on your win.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 11:05 PM
Thanks Virginia! Men are romantic but too shy to express it!:)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. I hope you will print this off and put it in a card as a gift. Have a blessed autumn day.......................
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Thanks Paula! I am pleased to hear from you always!! My kindest regards Krish
Edmonds  Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:39 AM
That’s a beautiful dedication to the one you love, and as already said it reads alike a song and a prayer. Congratulations on your win in the contest Krish…… Well done! Belle
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Thanks Belle! Appreciate your very kind words!:)
Alex Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:47 AM
"decades of love, dedications and care, decades still to share, may this last forever and for long!" - A beautiful poetic prayer. The whole poem is a beautiful love song. Congratulations!
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:51 AM
Thanks Christuraj!! So happy you like it! Regards
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