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Hand in hand with death in life

My thoughts are faults. My mind; a broken lens. Solely upon light; clarity depends. Unfilled desires are sorrows running rife. ‘Tis only death which shares with me this life.

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Date: 3/4/2020 3:19:00 PM
Last line is fantastic! Congratulations!
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Dill Dennison
Date: 3/4/2020 6:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/4/2020 5:54:00 AM
Nicely done, Dill. I love this poem. Great poetry my friend. Congratulations on your win in my contest. All the best.. Charlie
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Dill Dennison
Date: 3/4/2020 11:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/2/2020 9:14:00 PM
Very well composed poe-etic verse Dill.. Congrats on your win..
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Dill Dennison
Date: 3/3/2020 8:09:00 AM
Thank you