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Hand In Hand

( HAND IN HAND ) Laying underneath the stars, On a warm silent night. Your arms are wrapped around me, And everything feels right. You kiss me sweet and softly, I feel your warm gentle touch, You help me feel protected Under the sweet night sky rush. My world before me is perfect. There's nowhere else I want to be, Except laying underneath the stars Hand in hand, you and me. Just when everything is perfect, And you seem so delicately sweet, A rush of wind comes past me As I'm swept beneath my feet. Nothing could be more right, There's nowhere else I want to be. Let's take a walk my only love, Hand in hand, you and me. (c) Jasmine Paul 11-15-2014

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/15/2014 7:05:00 AM

I thought you posted two poems this morning and I started to read both. But Walk with me, turned me back to Hand in Hand? You might want to check this out. Or is there something different that I missed?

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/15/2014 7:02:00 AM

Hi, Jasmine, At first I thought you were talking to your boyfriend. But, then again you could have meant Jesus. I talk and walk with Him all the time! But either way, I enjoyed this poem and it's a 7. Blessings, Darlene. P.S. thanks for visiting my poem this morning.