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Hand In Hand

Hand in hand we walk through life. Im knowing one day you'll be my wife. Your touch your feel is so amazing. Your beauty is also dazing. You think we love in all the same ways. But really inside my heart is a dark haze. I want to love, I want to hope. But I feel my life hanging from a thin rope. I show my love in all the wrong ways. I hope are love atleast last a few days. *Not my best work I dont think:P....This is his girlfriend,he writes great comment on it and u will get somthing in return(:

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Date: 4/29/2011 7:20:00 PM
This is good u a great writer i just feel all the emotion and loving ur expressing
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