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Hand Claps

the sky opened..... up with an eruption... of handclaps...

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Heidie Buys

Date: 9/28/2008 8:19:00 AM

Oh my, this is so great. Made me smile in wonder at the vivid mental picture. Good one. Love Heidie

Sue Mason

Date: 9/26/2008 5:00:00 PM

What a wonderful Haiku here, Deneen. Better description than rumbling bowling balls ... LOL ... thanks so much for your contribution to Chop Suey ... it was fun !!

James Foulk

Date: 9/24/2008 1:30:00 PM

beautiful piece of warm poetry. thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments

Daver Austin

Date: 9/24/2008 5:14:00 AM

Nice haiku, Deneen. image-after the finale to Beethoven's Ninth. I just wrote a bunch on apples....love haiku and tanka. Love, Daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/23/2008 5:32:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku! ....Thank you very much for reading my poems, Deneen! ...Carrie