Hand Claps

the sky opened..... 

           up with an eruption...

                        of handclaps...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 28, 2008 at 8:19 AM
Oh my, this is so great. Made me smile in wonder at the vivid mental picture. Good one. Love Heidie
Mason Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 5:00 PM
What a wonderful Haiku here, Deneen. Better description than rumbling bowling balls ... LOL ... thanks so much for your contribution to Chop Suey ... it was fun !!
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September 24, 2008 at 1:30 PM
beautiful piece of warm poetry. thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments
Austin Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 5:14 AM
Nice haiku, Deneen. image-after the finale to Beethoven's Ninth. I just wrote a bunch on apples....love haiku and tanka. Love, Daver
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September 23, 2008 at 5:32 PM
Nicely done Haiku! ....Thank you very much for reading my poems, Deneen! ...Carrie
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