HALO OF HOPE -

There's a halo of hope, 
shimmering 
like a radiant light 
under God's feet;
A sunrise, 
blazing so bright 
to tell the world
to wake up, 
for another dawn 
has come.


A2024 Poetry Contest 
6th place
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Miller Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 2:02 AM
A wonderful poem; congratulations
Roger  Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 3:14 AM
Thank you very much...
Ashley Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:31 PM
Dear R. B., your lovely poem is, indeed, full of hope and glows with appreciation. Stunning and soulful. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, to you and yours, for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Roger  Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Thank you very much... Wish you the best... Happy new year...
Empress Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:02 AM
For another dawn has come.. ah such a soulful write. Absolutely love the depth of this and how you’ve as always conveyed your thoughts in such a seamless manner. I can see why this is in winners list, congratulations. Well deserved, and happy new year
Roger  Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Thank you very much dear... I like to see hope still even if my breath hangs by a thin red line...
One Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Roger  Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:42 PM
Thank you very much... Congratulations too...
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