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“HALO THE WARRIOR”

#1**Unicorn Valley**
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Land of purple hues
simple, sweet innocent eyes
rises from the east
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#2**Guile of Disciples**
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Magic gathering
hides away from the darkness
horn found on the ground
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#3**Beautified Dreams**
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Enchantment of life
ancestral home broken-down
adorn the unicorn
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#4**Freedom Quest**
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Liberty or Death
Unicorn celebration
Epic battle won
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by;PD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Callus Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Lovely string of Unicorn haiku! Re no4...both liberty and death provide freedom in their own way. hugs // paul
Michaels Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:20 AM
Some really great lines in here. Loved the way you weaved the four individual Haiku to create a fantastical tale. Who needs 3+ hour Hollywood epics?!
Campi Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your work here. Thanks for posting, Jancarl
Kilmer Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Very magical indeed. I could learn a thing or two from you on the Haiku poems. Nice write. !Kilimer
Anglesey Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:17 PM
I really like the magical style ... very nicely structured with great imagery :)
Mirza Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Love your poems!!! Wonderful work there!
Batson Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Nice Haiku. A nice read.
Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 2:29 PM
I believe there were unicorns! Light & Love
Horstkotter Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Very nice sets of haiku. Enjoyed.
Oyewole Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:45 AM
excellent haiku... Please check your inbox for my soupmail.~A.O
Komala Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 8:54 AM
very impressive write sweet poetess Linda :) love your works so much <3 <3 <3 hugs Sk
Breidenthal Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Love your imagination (: Excellent and descriptive set of haikus, glad I chose this one tah read. Always, Laura
Chircop Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 3:19 AM
Glad i stopped by pd. My favourite one is Unicorn Valley nd guile of disciples though i do love them all
Duncan Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 11:11 PM
Love your haiku's,,,,, Thank you for your nice comment on my " Missing Pieces " I thought I'd never hear from you again, nice surprise,,,, have an awesome PD ;}
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:57 PM
hey there, PD. What's up, sweetie?
Carrillo Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:36 PM
This is beautiful and touching. Thank you Linda - you are one of a kind. Many blessings today and always. Lucy
Martin Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 7:33 PM
love the magic this poem makes me feel thank you for sharing it and thank you for all your wonderful post on my writing I just put two more on because you inspired me to write down the thoughts in my head about a very special man I meet thank you so much your friend Nita
Komala Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 4:52 AM
Dear PD...thank you for sharing your brilliant work..am honor to read all you brilliant writes...wishing you all the best with luv and hugs...<3<3<3 SK
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:01 AM
liberty or death... is very powerful... emotion burns, fight the good fight, triumph over adversity, its our bloody right! give it to em p.d.:)
Moribund Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Hey PD: I like this poem a lot. I really connected with the #4 Freedom Quest, bravo!!!. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my little poem. Hope your had a great Thanksgiving!
Docherty Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 8:13 AM
A magical and mystical sequence of poetry every word carefully considered... Thankyou for your kindness of thought, word and wishes for this 'thanksgiving time of year' for yourselves... Not a holiday celebrated here but appreciated none the less... and wishing you the very best with many thanks also... Such a blessing to be amongst such great writers and friends whatever stage they be at. Looking forward to many more years of learning amongst everyone too! Kindest thoughts and wishes...
Devnath  Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Wonderful haiku series carry beautiful thoughts uncommon to me. Thanks....., loved always, bl
Liwayway Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 3:50 AM
Thank you so much dear PD for your very nice greetings. It's also my great honor to be a part of PS family and to know great poets like you whom I considered my teacher. I learned a lot from your poems with different forms. thanks for your friendship. This is one of the best blessings I have received this year. Happy Thanksgiving to you and to your family. hugs and kisses from me (^___^) Maria
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November 21, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Thank you for your lovely wish, dear PD!!! Have a very Happy Thanksgiving too!!! My life turned into a nightmare that I could have never fathom...I am starting Life from scratch, zero after awful events. That is the reason I was not very active lately in the Poetry Soup. Anyway I hope I'll get back when this nightmare fades away. Pray for me!!! Love you, Iolanda
Patrikar Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 7:41 PM
i see your unocorn craze is still up! nice write!! on soup after a really long time... -apoorva do visit my blog if you like to read fiction stories http://fictionworldbyap.blogspot.in/
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