Halloween - Senryu

Halloween - Senryu

Death stands in silence
chaperone to innocence
craven beggary


©10/18/2017

submitted to – Halloween Senryu – Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mohn Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 11:06 PM
love your take on this John...congrats!
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 2:35 PM
I like this senryu, John; the first line sets the eerie picture, the next two lines are food for thought. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Inman Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Deep meaning in this one John, enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Congrats! <3 Kim
Scars Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 5:44 AM
creepy senyru dear John! thank you and congrats :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Very well done, John. seems very senryu-like to me. Congrats.
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Terrific piece John, congratulations...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Back with congratulations :) xomo!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Great Senryu for more than just this contest, really fine work! That said, my best to you for the contest :) xomo!
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