Halloween Scene

~ Halloween scene ~
    

eyes feline, darkness

    pierce... cries, shrieks... hell's bedlam loosed...

        earth's hair stands on end
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Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 2:17 PM
superb final line here!
Wolf Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Thank you for your kind words about this little poem, Andrea. :) gw
Green Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 8:02 AM
"earth's hair stands on end" I loved that line. Nicely done my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 1:07 PM
Thanks for noticing and noting that third line, Chris... Can we all let our hair back down again now?! LOL. Here's to a Happy Halloween! ~ Gershon
Gondolf Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 6:57 AM
This has a spooky feeling to it, Gershon. Nicely written. John
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Spooky is the order of the day on Halloween, so thank you so much, John, for letting me know how this little poem struck you. Here's to a Happy Halloween! ~ Gershon
There Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Yikes! Perfectly eerie, Gershon! Really enjoyed this :)
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Thanks for the feedback on this 'eerie one,' H.T. Appreciate your great comment. Here's to a spooky (but safe) Halloween! ~ Gershon
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