Halloween Scare

In the frame of full moon silhouette hungry wolf barks
A grey castle on mystique hill top looms in the dark
Through the rusty steel gate a tall figure in black cloak
Comes out, the creepy stillness of the flimsy night chokes.
Arms stretched wide he walks on air like a hooded black bird
As the Count did in Transylvania people heard.
When the moon reaches the top of starless steely sky
He stands at my door, to stow the fear I vainly try.
Cold blue light of the eerie night smears the ashen face
Before I could retract I find myself in his brace
With wolf's red eyes glaring and fangs pressing bloody lips
On my jugular vein, he says your blood I will sip
You turn a vampire, in Dracula’s castle I’ll keep.

September 25, 2017.
Form : Rhyme. Syllable count : 13 each line.
Contest : Halloween Scare
Sponsored by : Russell Sivey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Now this is CREEPY--but REALLY well-done, Subimal. Congrats on your win! Janice
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Very creepy imagery Subimal. Nice write.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Thank you, James.
Barden Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal - keep up the great writing! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 11:41 PM
Thank you, Greg.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:51 PM
very scary imagery Subimal congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 11:37 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Excellent job Subimal! Great flow, great content :) my best to you for the contest! xomo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Thank you,Noureen for visiting and appreciating.
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