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Halloween Scare

In the frame of full moon silhouette hungry wolf barks A grey castle on mystique hill top looms in the dark Through the rusty steel gate a tall figure in black cloak Comes out, the creepy stillness of the flimsy night chokes. Arms stretched wide he walks on air like a hooded black bird As the Count did in Transylvania people heard. When the moon reaches the top of starless steely sky He stands at my door, to stow the fear I vainly try. Cold blue light of the eerie night smears the ashen face Before I could retract I find myself in his brace With wolf's red eyes glaring and fangs pressing bloody lips On my jugular vein, he says your blood I will sip You turn a vampire, in Dracula’s castle I’ll keep. September 25, 2017. Form : Rhyme. Syllable count : 13 each line. Contest : Halloween Scare Sponsored by : Russell Sivey.

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Date: 11/10/2017 8:32:00 AM
Now this is CREEPY--but REALLY well-done, Subimal. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:07:00 PM
Very creepy imagery Subimal. Nice write.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/9/2017 11:38:00 PM
Thank you, James.
Date: 11/9/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 11/9/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Greg.
Date: 11/9/2017 6:51:00 PM
very scary imagery Subimal congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2017 11:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 9/25/2017 9:49:00 AM
Excellent job Subimal! Great flow, great content :) my best to you for the contest! xomo
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:32:00 AM
Thank you,Noureen for visiting and appreciating.

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