Halloween Scare

In the frame of full moon silhouette hungry wolf barks
A grey castle on mystique hill top looms in the dark
Through the rusty steel gate a tall figure in black cloak
Comes out, the creepy stillness of the flimsy night chokes.
Arms stretched wide he walks on air like a hooded black bird
As the Count did in Transylvania people heard.
When the moon reaches the top of starless steely sky
He stands at my door, to stow the fear I vainly try.
Cold blue light of the eerie night smears the ashen face
Before I could retract I find myself in his brace
With wolf's red eyes glaring and fangs pressing bloody lips
On my jugular vein, he says your blood I will sip
You turn a vampire, in Dracula’s castle I’ll keep.

September 25, 2017.
Form : Rhyme. Syllable count : 13 each line.
Contest : Halloween Scare
Sponsored by : Russell Sivey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/10/2017 8:32:00 AM
Now this is CREEPY--but REALLY well-done, Subimal. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:07:00 PM
Very creepy imagery Subimal. Nice write.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/9/2017 11:38:00 PM
Thank you, James.
Date: 11/9/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/9/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Greg.
Date: 11/9/2017 6:51:00 PM
very scary imagery Subimal congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/9/2017 11:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 9/25/2017 9:49:00 AM
Excellent job Subimal! Great flow, great content :) my best to you for the contest! xomo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/26/2017 6:32:00 AM
Thank you,Noureen for visiting and appreciating.
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