HALLOWEEN MISHAP

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a crumpled skymap
lost broomstick? No, misplaced spells~
Halloween mishap

12th gradehalloweensenryu

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Paige Hind

October 31, 2025 at 4:40 PM

Cute :)

sara Etgen-Baker

November 2, 2025 at 5:50 PM

many thanks!

Line Gauthier

October 31, 2025 at 2:39 PM

charming ~

William Kelii Kekaula

October 31, 2025 at 12:35 PM

It’s the blessed A.M., and I’m tickled pink; it’s supposedly an orange day, well, I’ve neither pumpkins nor oranges, but over-ripened papayas will suffice, malama hiki hou, Aloha, William.

sara Etgen-Baker

November 2, 2025 at 5:51 PM

I'm jealous of your papayas....can't easily find them here. :-)

Sotto Poet

October 31, 2025 at 10:27 AM

The dedication required and the artistry that come alongside it resonate with me deeply. How astutely crafted it is. Delighted in the verses of this senryu.

sara Etgen-Baker

November 2, 2025 at 5:51 PM

wow, thank you, Sotto, for your visit and your outstanding comments. They mean a great deal to me. Texas hugs, Sara