Halloween Hunt

The moon was full that Halloween,
I strayed to sites I hadn't seen -
a castle, dungeon, disused jail,
a place they say that banshees wail...
I found the house beside a lake,
the note enough to make you quake:
'Beware: don't visit on this night  -
the place is bad, you'd die of fright.'
Despite the orbs my photos show,
no figures floating all a-glow,
nor eerie sounds of creaky floors,
not even countless slamming doors,
if something there was watching me,
it wasn't something I could see.
The moon still shining, full and bright,
my hunt was fruitless on that night.
My search for spirits isn't done;
I'm lonely, I'm the only one...

written 27th September for Chantelle's Halloween Moon contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 1:00 AM
Awesome Halloween write Jack and I see congratulations are in order. Great poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:23 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Perrin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:06 AM
I absolutely love this! Congratulations Jack :-) x
Chiri Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:00 PM
In search of companionship...Somehow this reminds me of Roy Orbison's..."Only the Lonely". Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:38 PM
A unique approach to the theme, Jack. Sometimes the search cannot finish!
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Creative work. Not sure if you are a ghost or you are you. LOL. Reads like winners' list to me. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:35 PM
I LOVE the story behind this witty poem, Jack. Whoever left the note just wanted to scare others away. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 10:38 AM
I'm not a Halloween fan jack but enjoyed your poem... talking of spooky tales watching one episode of most haunted with Yvette Fielding is about as much as my stomach could bear lol:-) hugs jan xx
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