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Halloween Haiku

                                          moonlight follows me..
                                 stepping through crackling leaves..
                                           a shadow peaks out..


by Michael J Falotico
10/24/11
P.D.'s Halloween Haiku contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/1/2011 8:23:00 PM
congrats. I'd have placed it even higher!!
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Date: 10/31/2011 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Michael
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:35:00 PM
This one is brief......yet a lovely pause of suspense awaits around the corner.....shhhhhh.......I can hear him.......BOO!!!!!! lol. Congrats, MIchael! Hope u are doing well....A few hours til the haunting hour arrives here in Ohio....I think I will be hateful to the trick or treater this year and pass out homework assignments...that'lll freak em out!! ha ha. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/31/2011 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2011 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win Michael
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Date: 10/30/2011 7:17:00 PM
Congrats Michael luv on a super win with this stunning Halloween Haiku luv.. enjoy the holiday with spirit..oh.. and so glad the GMEN squeezed out that win today.. I was so worried.. did u get much snow? we got four inches down here..oh I dislike cold and snow...where is the beach and heat?????xoxo...J.G. in bundled up mode..
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Date: 10/30/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congrats to you on your win in the haiku contest...luv shannon
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Date: 10/30/2011 4:33:00 PM
Good luck also for this one too Michael. Happy Halloween and loved the part where 'moonlight follows me...' ;D
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Date: 10/30/2011 2:52:00 PM
MICHAEL , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.
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Date: 10/29/2011 8:51:00 AM
Hi Michael--ooooooooh, what is lurking in the shadow? Love your haiku! Good luck on the contest! Gwendolen
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:43:00 PM
I LOVE it. One STRONG limerick better than two or three mediocre ones!!
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Date: 10/25/2011 10:39:00 AM
thank you for the support,..p.d.
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:15:00 AM
hope that shadow is luv Michael.. and the moonlight is a nice touch .. crackling leaves a bit scary.. need arms to protect me..haha.. awesome..good luck in PD's contest on Halloween.. we are preparing for a big party ..mostly family.. some friends.. and our new neighbors on either side of our huge driveways.. oh.. xoxo..
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:21:00 AM
nicely done.. cory
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Date: 10/24/2011 8:59:00 AM
Happy Halloween Michael, very nice haiku, luck to you in the contest...luv shannon
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Date: 10/24/2011 8:37:00 AM
Hello nice reading, a halloween night pictured! Anoucheka :)
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Date: 10/24/2011 6:22:00 AM
I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Michael. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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