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Halloween Haiku

Tonight's Halloween monsters are walking the street. Witches and demons. Ghastly shrieks and screams, a fearful cacophony. screaming "Trick or treat! Moans, howls, flashing lights, spider webs, plastic black cats, I laugh at my fear. written for Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. "Halloween Haiku" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2010 1:16:00 PM

congratulations! Dory, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/12/2010 6:08:00 AM

congratulations Dory!

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/11/2010 10:14:00 AM

congrats on your win, nice one

John Freeman

Date: 9/11/2010 12:24:00 AM

Congratulations Dory on your success in the competition. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 10:59:00 PM

What a cool last line. I laugh at my fear! Cute win. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/10/2010 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2010 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Dory

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/10/2010 6:23:00 PM

enjoyed this one, Dory! --congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 5:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Dory. Love Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 2:15:00 PM

Dory, Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2010 1:49:00 PM

Congrats Dory on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest.. an awesome entry ..ful of spooky lines of Halloween flavor... enjoy and thankxx for supporting my contest... hope u will enter my new one posted shortly luv..

Alan Summers

Date: 9/10/2010 3:01:00 AM

These are great fun. I'd be really interested in reading more about your last experience. It seems that everyone was good at dressing up it was as scary as that Buffy Vampire Slayer Halloween party, for real. ;-) Alan http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 8:36:00 PM

I really like how you did yours, playfully scary. Loved the line fearful cacophony. LUv, Andrea

Dory Chrest

Date: 9/8/2010 7:28:00 PM

counts on fingers....thank you for the heads up Linda Marie...much appreciated!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2010 7:23:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my contest Dory.. your second line ..first stanza has one too many syllables in in so please correct before contest closes luv..and good luck..

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/8/2010 5:57:00 PM

This is really cool..loved it ..good luck in the contest..Take care~Deb

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/8/2010 4:41:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Dory.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2010 4:31:00 PM

WOW! cool entry, the best luck in the contest,..p.d