Halloween Ghouls

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HALLOWEEN GHOULS Run as fast as your legs can move Move much faster,this's no time to prove You're so brave and not scared of any spooks Ghouls and black flying bats soar the sky above Witches cackle and prepare merrily evil potions and some brew Tonigh they're cooking a very yummy ghoulish stew So run as fast as your legs can move 'Cause they're planning no good They're gonna make you drink their awful slough And turn you into another HALLOWEEN GHOUL. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October,31,2014

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/1/2014 10:14:00 AM

Dorian . . . This reminds me of a theme I am working on for a short story I plan to write on "Ghouls." Except my Ghouls are the real deal and not just on Halloween. I must say that you've mesmerized me with many of your like Halloween writes. But I like the dark stuff too -- as you already know. A "7" from me "D." And I hope you had a "Ghoulish Halloween" -- only figuratively and not literally!! Cheers and Spill Ink Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:54:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Gary,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/31/2014 9:25:00 PM

Delightfully ghoulish and creepy write !! Happy Halloween !!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/31/2014 11:56:00 PM

Thank you Debra so much for reading my very ghoulish Halloween poem! I hope you had a nice one.lol ;) well, Halloween is well over now. Best to you my friend! xxx D.