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Halloween Fire Spirits' Revival

HALLOWEEN    FIRE    SPIRITS’   REVIVAL


Before building the fire
We dug out a lawn square 
To keep the ash  we knew would be there
And stacked the sods near the pyre.

The lawn fits back well –
No ghost of last year’s flame.
Each Halloween  it’s the same –
There is no grave hole to tell.

Papers, cardboard, gasoline,   -  oh !

The hissing from  a  heap
Of slippery wet leaves
Like a snake’s last scream.
Swarms of sparks stream
In hot gas gusts to the eaves,
Burning out as they  leap,

Falling as warm grey dust.
Soot flakes like scattered crows
Fly skyward, black and ragged
From damp dead wood’s jagged
Heat  -  soaked spars’ and oars’
Life-after-life  in a final burst.

Each deadened  ember
Sends a second soul 
To the  lifeless  hole
With a final life to  remember.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Three cheers for winning he ocntest, stdney.. astounding piece! warmest, nette
Mehta Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sydney
Devonshire Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Building a bonfire must have been a cool way to celebrate Halloween, Sydney. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Congrats Sydney on your winning poem in Paula's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. a perfect piece to express the theme... Happy Thanksgiving to u and yours with luv..
Brown Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Sydney. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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