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Hallowed Homecoming

Hallow's Eve ignites
Sisters draw towards the fire
     Home at last unrest


17.10.10


Composed for Laura Loo's
Halloween Senryu Contest
(syllables checked)

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Paul Callus

October 24, 2017 at 1:51 PM

Would witches be coming back for revenge! Congratulations on your podium finish, Maureen! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2017 at 7:06 AM

Congrats, Maureen! <3 Kim

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 24, 2017 at 7:59 AM

Thank you Kim :) X's & O's mo!

James Inman

October 24, 2017 at 6:59 AM

Interesting concept Maureen. A deathly reunion awaiting the last to join them.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 24, 2017 at 7:58 AM

Thank you James :)

Beautiful Scars

October 24, 2017 at 5:19 AM

great senryu, creepy!! Many thanks and congrats sweet Maureen! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 24, 2017 at 7:57 AM

Thank you for this fabulous contest, it was a fun inspiring challenge :) cheers my dear! Have a wonderful day! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2017 at 3:21 PM

You saw it as I did too, Maureen! I enjoyed seeing your winning poem. congrats.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 9:06 PM

Thank you Andrea :) Cheers! XOmo

John Michaels

October 23, 2017 at 1:19 PM

Nicely-penned, Maureen. Congrats on your win! Regards, John.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 1:29 PM

Thank you John :)

Roy Pett

October 23, 2017 at 12:10 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Maureen, I thought this would do well, so pleased it did, great Senryu. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 12:12 PM

Thank you so much Roy! I appreciate your confidence :) A lovely day to you xomo!

Charlie Smith

October 23, 2017 at 10:48 AM

Congratulations Maureen...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 11:46 AM

Thank you Charlie :) a wonderful day to you! xomo

Subimal Sinha-Roy

October 23, 2017 at 6:15 AM

Congratulations on your great win, Noureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 7:10 AM

Thank you Subimal :) a lovely day to you! xomo

Roy Pett

October 19, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Hi Maureen, this certainly hits the spot, beautifully deep, such a cleverly written poem, GL in contest. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 19, 2017 at 8:25 AM

Thank you so much Roy :) Have a wonderful day! xomo

Janis Medders Tobechi

October 16, 2017 at 2:36 PM

Great senryu Maureen. I like how the Sisters are coming together. Good luck in the contest.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 16, 2017 at 4:32 PM

Thank you Janis :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 12, 2017 at 12:32 PM

Real cool poem w/a ghoulish twist at the end, Maureen. You're a natural at writing senryu poems, dear friend. A fine thought probing poem. Love and peace forever.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 12, 2017 at 2:14 PM

Thank you dear friend! I am flattered you think so Freddie, with that I should endevor to try this form again :) love and hugs! mo

Russell Sivey

October 11, 2017 at 8:50 AM

Wow, this is a fantastic Senryu my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this morning! I simply love a good Halloween poem and this one qualifies as a stupendous and awesome poem, so I love it exquisitely! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 11, 2017 at 9:14 AM

Thank you so much Russell! My first ever Senryu, delighted by the prompt! Still toying to enter your Halloween contest... gotta say scary :) have a fantastic day! xomo

Chris Green

October 11, 2017 at 6:01 AM

Very, very cool Maureen. This is the perfect little Halloween poem. Nicely eerie.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 11, 2017 at 7:09 AM

Thank you Chris! Thank you Laura Loo for the prompt :) hugs to you, lovely to see you xomo!

Darren White

October 11, 2017 at 4:59 AM

Wonderful, witchcraft, love it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 11, 2017 at 7:08 AM

Cackling crackling laughter "Thank you my pretty"!

Gregory Richard Barden

October 10, 2017 at 11:29 PM

I hear the cauldron bubbling, Maureen ... toil and trouble! Wonderful! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 11, 2017 at 7:03 AM

Here I was telling a story about sisters burned in a fire and the one that got away and you have to bring up witches, always witches, a woman can't cast a few spells without being labelled a witch, levitate, you're a witch, turn someone into a toad, a witch. Witch witch witch. Sigh ;)