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Hallowed Ground

They marched to field Their fate was sealed A life to yield As deaths increase I closed my eyes To realize With deepest sighs I came in peace contest Desiderata Frederic Parker 12/5/14 number 3. With all its shame,drudgery and broken dream, it's still a beautiful world

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:08:00 PM
FREDERIC,, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:19:00 AM
what a unique and well-expressed work about war and peace, Frederick.. a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
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Date: 12/15/2014 10:32:00 AM
Suits the theme but most of all I love the sound of this poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:23:00 PM
a sad lament Frederic, sadly true in so many instances. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:35:00 PM
Wow.....this fits that # 3 just so perfectly .....and perfectly sad it is! Well said!!
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Date: 12/14/2014 10:49:00 AM
A very good one for the theme you chose. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/14/2014 9:31:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:23:00 AM
Gave me chills..a fav for me sir..congratulations
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:24:00 AM
A deep thought expressed so well, congratulations on the win, Frederic
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:11:00 AM
Deep n beautiful is ur write Frederic! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 12/14/2014 1:01:00 AM
The first verse will win a queen,congrats on the win Frederic...huggs
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Date: 12/5/2014 3:24:00 PM
There is a fine line between death and life . . . I agree, it's a beautiful but dangerous! Live generously my friend.
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Date: 12/5/2014 11:51:00 AM
so deep and sad Frederic - good luck! Hugs jan xxx
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