Halley's Comet

like Halley's comet
I burned quickly through your heart
a flash in your night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 6, 2009 at 2:42 AM
Very interesting analogy, JB, comparing fleeting love to the famous comet that reappears periodically. Excellent haiku! Love, carolyn
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