Halfway See

Frank H, To look and only halfway see, the lady wanted, but now free, who haunts you now, the tiny chill, where love has gone, you pay the bill, almost halfway cross a sea. Joe M, we seem upon the brink, while madness raises such a stink, and murder happens in a blink, the gall of suiciders :( John S the passion for the lovely pit, the breasts from heaven calmy sit, the combination makes me sweat a bit, but then i'm being childish ...it tit tit:)
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Culverhouse Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 5:07 PM
I am not sure if I understand.....well yes I think I do....
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 6:38 PM
i never did understand how relationships work, Doris, but still trying to figure it:)
Sivey Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 4:04 PM
I enjoyed your write today Don! Very creative and masterfully written!! Great work!!
Brown Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Enjoyed reading today Don. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 12:19 PM
well done Don, much enjoyed your rhymes this morning
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 6:44 PM
Francine my sweet if you were near, the passion pouring in your ear, from a johnson so sincere, my heart if palpitating here:)
Smith Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 10:16 AM
'The passion for the lovely pit' makes me sweat a lot; cost me everything I own. You write it well.
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 6:42 PM
little women at the time, are worth almost every dime, some spend later, some are fine, love hate em, sweetest wine ...
Lane Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 8:06 AM
I love these poems that you do, Great. Tony
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