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Halfway See

Frank H, To look and only halfway see, the lady wanted, but now free, who haunts you now, the tiny chill, where love has gone, you pay the bill, almost halfway cross a sea. Joe M, we seem upon the brink, while madness raises such a stink, and murder happens in a blink, the gall of suiciders :( John S the passion for the lovely pit, the breasts from heaven calmy sit, the combination makes me sweat a bit, but then i'm being childish ...it tit tit:)

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Date: 9/15/2011 5:07:00 PM
I am not sure if I understand.....well yes I think I do....
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/15/2011 6:38:00 PM
i never did understand how relationships work, Doris, but still trying to figure it:)
Date: 9/15/2011 4:04:00 PM
I enjoyed your write today Don! Very creative and masterfully written!! Great work!!
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Date: 9/15/2011 1:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:19:00 PM
well done Don, much enjoyed your rhymes this morning
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/15/2011 6:44:00 PM
Francine my sweet if you were near, the passion pouring in your ear, from a johnson so sincere, my heart if palpitating here:)
Date: 9/15/2011 10:16:00 AM
'The passion for the lovely pit' makes me sweat a lot; cost me everything I own. You write it well.
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/15/2011 6:42:00 PM
little women at the time, are worth almost every dime, some spend later, some are fine, love hate em, sweetest wine ...
Date: 9/15/2011 8:06:00 AM
I love these poems that you do, Great. Tony
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