2nd in Half Past Summer, Two Months Till Fall Contest (Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich)
Judged: July 27th, 2025
Half past summer, two months till fall, boredom, bullies; teacher neglect. sandcastles, encase, be my pall! Half past summer, two months till fall. when school bells toll, tenderfoots bawl— sun's embrace, we'd warmly collect. Half past summer, two months till fall, blackboards, bullies; teacher regret.
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