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Half Passed Out Noon

evaporating mercury it's past my daytime MagiCicada13

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/25/2019 3:29:00 PM

Bullseye, O Archer. You've nailed this haiku! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/25/2019 6:20:00 PM

Tee hee ;), mo knows the heat xomo

Sand Blown

Date: 7/19/2019 8:03:00 PM

wow...nice one...describes my day : )

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2019 9:32:00 PM

Enchanté! :), xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/19/2019 10:20:00 AM

Or even my nighttime...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2019 9:31:00 PM

Too hot time. It's the humidity ;), xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/19/2019 1:09:00 AM

It is accurate for me also. I am trotting toward my pillow.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2019 8:47:00 AM

I hide in climate control ;), xomo!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/18/2019 11:25:00 PM

Maureen, I can see the mercury evaporate. Though it's past my bedtime. Very clever. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2019 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Richard! xomo

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 7/18/2019 10:49:00 PM

LOVE it!! "it's past my daytime" ;D

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2019 8:45:00 AM

Tee hee! ;), I used to LOVE the heat, I had been cold enough, biking through Canadian winters; but now I know it's PCS, sensory overload. xomo!

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/18/2019 10:28:00 PM

COOOL POEM! My imagination is twitterpated!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2019 8:42:00 AM

Ah thank you Tim! Sweetness! xomo :), xomo!