Half Passed Out Noon

evaporating 
   mercury                                  

   it's past my daytime





MagiCicada13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Bullseye, O Archer. You've nailed this haiku! :) gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Tee hee ;), mo knows the heat xomo
Blown Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 8:03 PM
wow...nice one...describes my day : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Enchanté! :), xomo!
Michael Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Or even my nighttime...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Too hot time. It's the humidity ;), xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 1:09 AM
It is accurate for me also. I am trotting toward my pillow.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 8:47 AM
I hide in climate control ;), xomo!
Theraven Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 11:25 PM
Maureen, I can see the mercury evaporate. Though it's past my bedtime. Very clever. -Richard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Richard! xomo
Mcferran Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 10:49 PM
LOVE it!! "it's past my daytime" ;D
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Tee hee! ;), I used to LOVE the heat, I had been cold enough, biking through Canadian winters; but now I know it's PCS, sensory overload. xomo!
Mcguire Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 10:28 PM
COOOL POEM! My imagination is twitterpated!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Ah thank you Tim! Sweetness! xomo :), xomo!
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