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Half a Mind

I often wonder if I were to wander about How often i'd fall into love or into doubt Then she slips up and catches me again Frees me as I ponder, just who have I been? You could say darling, that I have half a mind Cause the other one isn't mine to mind, yet It was a startling find to be sure, oh to be sure Of anything with her, her love my only cure! Oh exclamatory sentences are fair game in love War within went off without a hitch, like a glove Honey because you had the other half, snatched It right out from under my nose, and thatched Together a right charming peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/28/2011 10:25:00 PM
It sounds to me like you are already in love, and that she is too. Sweet verse on the imaginings that go along with that state of mind
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:22:00 PM
Half a mind, I sense that she brings it full circle for you ;) really enjoyed this write of your Tim and thank you for your kind comments :) wilma
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Date: 8/27/2011 10:30:00 PM
I really enjoyed this creative write! Is it her that is clever, or is it him? Great piece!!
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Tim B
Date: 8/27/2011 10:51:00 PM
Oh trust me, it is her :) Of course one of us is that wicked kind of clever and the other is more of the logical kind of clever.
Date: 8/27/2011 5:55:00 PM
nice one Tim and expressing how u feel about someone special.. creates a lovely poem..like this one.. cure is a cure all.. I can attest to that luv..
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Date: 8/27/2011 12:47:00 PM
A sweetie of a write.. nice one, Tim! and.. thanks for the comment on my double-dactyl. It IS a problem and not a funny one, so I changed my category from funny to family.. Beauty weekend to ya! ~N
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