Tim B Poet Rhyme

Half a Mind

I often wonder if I were to wander about
How often i'd fall into love or into doubt
Then she slips up and catches me again
Frees me as I ponder, just who have I been?

You could say darling, that I have half a mind
Cause the other one isn't mine to mind, yet
It was a startling find to be sure, oh to be sure
Of anything with her, her love my only cure!

Oh exclamatory sentences are fair game in love
War within went off without a hitch, like a glove
Honey because you had the other half, snatched
It right out from under my nose, and thatched
Together a right charming peace.

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Elizabeth Wesley August 28, 2011 at 10:25 PM It sounds to me like you are already in love, and that she is too. Sweet verse on the imaginings that go along with that state of mind

Wilma Neels August 28, 2011 at 5:22 PM Half a mind, I sense that she brings it full circle for you ;) really enjoyed this write of your Tim and thank you for your kind comments :) wilma

Russell Sivey August 27, 2011 at 10:30 PM I really enjoyed this creative write! Is it her that is clever, or is it him? Great piece!! Tim B August 27, 2011 at 10:51 PM Oh trust me, it is her :) Of course one of us is that wicked kind of clever and the other is more of the logical kind of clever.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 27, 2011 at 5:55 PM nice one Tim and expressing how u feel about someone special.. creates a lovely poem..like this one.. cure is a cure all.. I can attest to that luv..

Nancy Jones August 27, 2011 at 12:47 PM A sweetie of a write.. nice one, Tim! and.. thanks for the comment on my double-dactyl. It IS a problem and not a funny one, so I changed my category from funny to family.. Beauty weekend to ya! ~N